This is the second version of this story. It's where it stands after a week or so of thinking-over, poking and prodding. I wouldn't necessarily say it's finished - when is a story ever finished? - and I'm not quite happy with the ending, but it feels a little closer now. Thanks again to goldatamera for the prompt of skate ramp, plastic forks, and Ikea

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Here's another story written to a prompt. As with the last one, I'll post two versions: the original and a revision. It's largely for my own benefit, but if you feel like posting comments or questions, that would be great.

This is the original, which I wrote more or less off the cuff in one-and-a-half sittings - had to stop for a bit of dinner, ( Read more... )

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